Monday, July 26, 2004

Villanelles

so while reading Neil Gaiman's Smoke and Mirrors I ran across a rondel* which reminded me that I'd been meaning to find out the 411 on a similar(ish) kind of poem called a villanelle.

it turns out that the villanelle is a French form imported into English and consists of 19 lines arranged into five triplets and a closing quatrain. the line lengths and meters and rhythms are entirely a matter of personal choice, but the line endings must rhyme like dis:

aba aba aba aba aba abaa.

yes: there are only two rhymes allowed. it gets worse, though: the first line of the first stanza must also be the last line of the second and fourth stanzas, and the last line of the first stanza must be the last line of the third and fifth stanzas. these two repeated lines must then also be the last two lines of the final stanza.

to illustrate: probably the most famous example of a villanelle (or at least the one I'm most familiar with) is Dylan Thomas' Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night which on rereading is not nearly as great as it was when I was a teenager, but still good (with repeated lines bolded and italicized for the edification and education of the reader):

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night,

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night,

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light. 
  
a few more examples: Oscar Wilde's Theocritus; Roethke's The Waking; Sylvia Plath's Admonitions; and an unexpected Entropic Villanelle from Thomas M. Disch.

(note: all of the above shamelessly cribbed from Vince Gotera's excellent Craft of Poetry and Emily Lloyd's Villanelle Central.)

* "Reading the Entrails: A Rondel", Neil Gaiman
 
They’ll call it chance, or luck, or call it Fate -
The cards and stars that tumble as they will.
Tomorrow manifests and brings the bill
For every kiss and kill, the small and great.
You want to know the future, love? Then wait:
I’ll answer your impatient questions. Still -
They’ll call it chance, or luck, or call it Fate,
The cards and stars that tumble as they will.

I’ll come to you tonight, dear, when it’s late,
You will not see me; you may feel a chill.
I’ll wait until you sleep, then take my fill,
And that will be your future on a plate.
They’ll call it chance, or luck, or call it Fate.


(it's mainly the way there's the repetition of lines that reminded me)



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